Dear reader, it has been such a joy to share so many poems with you this year for National Poetry Month. I’d intended to include more different types of posts this year — prompts and poetry-adjacent things and such — but ultimately I just had such a wealth of people’s poems to share that I bent to that impulse as the month wore on.
Today I’m pleased to feature a poem by Saba Husain to round out our poetry celebration. I hope you’ll enjoy it, as I hope you’ve enjoyed this whole month’s series.
The Missing Planet
Oblivious to the red blood moon
we strung the universe on a wire hanger
in order of distance from the sun:
Neptune’s swing entangled
Saturn’s rings, and sent Jupiter
spinning towards Mars.
While the lunar jaw dropper was witnessed
from Sri Lanka to California,
I counted generations on my fingertips,
and imagined faces I’d never met
turned towards the sky.
In another time and age I’d be
on my knees at the spectacle,
having dallied enough nights on my driveway
to know a Texas sky.
Grandson, hold on to the blue green
sphere you plucked from your mobile,
tuck the Earth under your pillow,
let the moon orbit your eyes.
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Saba Z Husain’s work has appeared in Sequestrum, Bangalore Review, Barrow Street, Cimarron Review, Texas Review, Bellevue Review, Houston Chronicle, Aleph Review, Synkroniciti, Equinox, and the anthologies of Mutabilis Press, Ankelbiters Press, Lamar University Press, Southern Poetry Vol. VIII: Texas, and elsewhere. She was a finalist for the 2021 and 2020 X.J. Kennedy Poetry Prize, and semifinalist for the 2020 Philip Levine Poetry Prize. Saba serves on the board of Mutabilis Press.
I was so immersed in the poem and then! The address/turn at the end and how it circles back to “counted generations” stanzas prior! And to close the poem on that immediate and very present tender address! *And* to end with the poem with an ecological urging through crafting an image of a little earth hanging from a crib mobile above a grandson(,the future,)! Lovely, Saba.
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Dear Aliah, thank you for your thoughtful reading and the wonderful comments.
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