Hello! Sorry this post is a little late, but there were too many holiday festivities over the weekend for me to get this scene into a readable state in time.
So below you’ll find the fourth installment in a new story I’m working on, working title “The Frog Wish.” I hope you’ll read it and give me your opinions on it. It’s best to start with the first scene and work through them in order for them to make the most sense.
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Click this link for the third scene.
“The Frog Wish” (part 4)
The mirror world was cold. Eleanor wasn’t dressed warmly enough in the bum-around t-shirt she’d put on to move furniture. She let her hair out of its ponytail, but that only kept the wind off her neck and shoulders. It was something, but not enough. And she had no idea how long she’d been here because whenever she looked at her watch, the hands just spun around like a drunken compass pointing at everything but the time. And the landscape they gestured to appeared to be a grayscale world of nebulous wooded avenues and the vague sense of the outdoors. She couldn’t see far and didn’t want to go wandering, lest she become lost and unable to return to whatever portal Moira had sent her through. So she sat down in the shelter of a large silver tree and stewed in furious wait for Reginald to show up.
“A frog. How am I even going to recognize him?” He hadn’t looked particularly unusual, as frogs went, the one time she’d seen him in Moira’s shop.
Had that only been this morning?
Yes, she had just been in the shop today, and she remembered Moira had dropped something small and hard into her pocket. Eleanor was still wearing those same loose lounging pants and pulled the item out. It was maybe the size of three acorns tied together and wrapped in black and white ribbons. She unwrapped them and found a dark stone, almost burgundy-brown, covered in alternating bands of different shades of red. It was polished smooth and warm from being close to her body.
“Thank you for not traveling far from this spot,” came a croaky voice off to her left.
Eleanor spun around and saw a large frog staring at her. “Reginald?” she asked, hoping she wasn’t talking to some random frog and also, hearing voices that weren’t there.
“That’s me. Ribbit.” The frog’s tongue whipped from its mouth and licked its own eyeball.
“Moira sent you?”
“Did she tell you why she sent me into the mirror world?”
“Is that what you’re calling it? Ribbit.”
“What else am I going to call it?” she asked, more shrilly than she intended. “How did she even put me here? How can I get home?” She lifted the book and the stone. “And what use are these?”
“You have any other questions?” Was it possible for a frog to look even more nonplussed than a frog usually did? If so, Reginald seemed to be attempting it.
Eleanor put her head down on her knees. “This experience has reached the limits of my ability to handle the surreal.”
“That’s okay.” She looked up at him. “I’ll wait until you’re ready to get going.” Reginald’s tongue flicked out again and caught something Eleanor couldn’t even see.
“Are you going to take me home?”
“I want to talk to Moira.”
“I don’t have a phone, so you’re going to have to wait until you get back to the other side.”
“How the hell am I supposed to do that??”
Eleanor put her face in her hands and screamed. When she looked back up, Reginald was still sitting there, looking as calm as any frog she’d ever seen. Which is to say, just like all frogs. Frogs which sat on the edges of ponds, and under hedges near the sidewalk after a rain, and occasionally in the woods Eleanor had visited when she was a child and her family got out of the city for a couple of days. Frogs which could not, as far as she had ever known, do anything at all to be helpful other than eat mosquitoes.
Finally she got up and dusted off whatever black dirt might have gotten on the back of her pants. She held out the stone toward Reginald.
“What is this rock?” she asked. “Can you identify it?”
He twisted his eyes slightly. “Looks like a tiger’s eye.”
A stone of protection. Okay, best not to lose that. She stuffed it back into her pocket and wrapped the ribbons into a loop and put them in there, too. She held up the fairy tale book.
“And this? Why did Moira think I need this here with me?”
“Don’t you like to read? Ribbit.”
She took a deep breath to avoid shouting at him. He was just a frog, after all. What did he know from books?
“How long am I going to be stuck here?” Moira had made it seem like it might be a while, if she was planning to take care of Eleanor’s house while she was gone.
And what about her client meetings next week?
And what about food? She was starting to feel hungry. So far she hadn’t seen anything in the twenty-foot radius she’d explored that might be edible.
“And what time is it, anyway? Do you know?”
Reginald’s eyes swiveled up at what passed for sky here: a dense canopy of metallic looking leaves. He looked back at her. “Night.”
She closed her eyes and took a slow, deep breath. Then let it out. Then took another, and slowly let it out. After her third cleansing breath, she could speak in a calmer tone of voice.
“What am I supposed to do here?”
“My guess is go on a quest. Ribbit.”
“And are you going to help me with that?” Why else would Moira have sent him?
“I could. I know a pretty terrific spot not far from here where people sometimes visit.”
She wondered what people, and whether Moira had shoved them through their own mirrors, too.
“All right then.” She bent down, then untied and retied her shoelaces a little more securely. When she stood up, she made her t-shirt as presentable as she could. She put her hair back into its ponytail then thought better of it; it was still pretty cold here. She looked down at Reginald. “Lead the way.”
“Ribbit.” He turned around and hopped off, pretty fast for a little guy. She had to jog after him to keep up.
Thank you for reading! In the comments, I welcome your feedback:
* What did you like?
* What confused you, if anything?
* What needs work?
* What are you most interested about?
* What do you think will happen next?
The Witchy Weekends series is finished for another eleven months, but if you’re interested in reading more of Eleanor’s story, please do let me know! I hope you’ve enjoyed this little experiment of mine; tell me what you thought in the comments below.
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3 thoughts on “Witchy Weekends: The Frog Wish (part 4)”
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It is so cool that we are seeing this story unfold in real time as you imagine it! I wonder if the scene of spending too much on furniture is a foreshadow of Eleanor learning a lesson about the cost of impulsiveness in the mirror world. How old is Eleanor? Has she finished college? Is she working? She seems young and carefree enough to not worry too much about needing to find her way home right away, and I love that Moira is helping her to grow. I’m curious how the book will help her in this quest; will she meet some characters from it? I wonder if there are other talking animals in this world, or if perhaps Reginald is a cursed person. It’s fun to discover the rules of magic in a world – who knows about it, how many people have the ability, and what is possible with the magic.
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Thank you so much for all of this! 🙂 I’m glad you’re enjoying it. As soon as my current book is in the publishing production queue, I’ll be able to focus on other new projects. 🙂