Lately I’ve been exploring myth poetry and fairy tale poetry with my Creative Writing students. These are ekphrastic forms, responding in some way to some other art that has gone before –– in these cases, the art being cultural and literary. It’s amazing stuff, and I love it, and they seem to as well. In fact, every year I teach these, the myth poems and fairy tales poems my students write are sometimes their best work to date.
So I recently came across this myth poem, which offers the reader such a smooth transition from dreamlike story to gut punch. If you enjoyed Kelly Cressio-Moeller’s poem last week, even though this poem by Sarah Blake is stylistically different, my guess is you’ll dig on this one, too.
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Aphrodite’s Dreaming
A shark bites my hip
and I watch the blood
curl out into the sea.
Poseidon pushes him
away and runs his hand
over the teethmarks, each
a little frown.
He’s having me
for tea, and everyone
is naked. He says, That’s
how fish are. Don’t be so
embarrassed. But that’s
not the right word.
I stir my tea with his
trident. I stir my tea
with his crown. I stir
my tea to forget
how he touches me,
knowing soon I’ll wake.
***
Sarah Blake is the author of Mr. West and the forthcoming collection, Let’s Not Live on Earth (both from Wesleyan University Press). An illustrated workbook accompanies her first chapbook, Named After Death (Banango Editions). In 2013, she was awarded a literature fellowship from the NEA. She lives outside of Philadelphia with her husband and son. http://www.sarahblakepoetry.com
I like this one simply as a wordscape.
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